Whitewashed Tomb

By: bbungard1

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DATE SUBMITTED

7/27/2010

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9

FINAL SCORE

2.6

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A very controversial shirt for a controversial topic. Jesus himself brought this one up. He was not very liked for doing so either. He was rebuking the pharasees telling them they are like whitewashed tombs, cleaning themselves up on the outside but bones still lie beneath. I wanted a shirt that was just as controversial as Jesus' statements. I believe that this shirt hits to the heart. I wanted to challenge people into looking at religion and then truely looking at their heart and what truely lies beneath. I think this shirt will get people talking about God and Christianity. The ultimate goal is to get people where they are at.

9 COMMENTS

Flick - 8/11/2010 5:14:11 PM

it could use some work


DaughterofEve DoE - 8/10/2010 10:34:42 AM

agree w/Serloren


beccakg09 - 8/4/2010 12:48:08 PM

it just doesn't "Pop" but great idea just work on lightening up the graphic so it's more visible.


DamenBradley - 8/2/2010 8:18:52 PM

This is a great design! The colors are a little dark but the yellow brings it all together and makes it stand out a lot. Keep up the good work!


bbungard1 - 7/29/2010 11:05:21 PM

Hey thanks serloren I will keep that in mind on the next design. Well the shirt color is a maroonish color. The reason I picked the maroon was because it looked way better on my photoshop and the yellow in the design made it stand out much better. Hopefully I can get the dpi better next time. But thanks for the input from everyone.


Brent - 7/29/2010 3:35:22 PM

Gonna go against the previous 3 comments actually. The fact that it's so dark is what gives the shirt it's edge, which, since you said it's about a controversial topic, only adds to that I think. Subtle is the way to go this time around.


Rose-Antoinette - 7/28/2010 8:55:18 PM

I agree with both said comments. Its an awesome shirt though :D


Eddie Bratrud - 7/28/2010 5:52:58 PM

I like the Idea, but must say I agree with Serloren on the visual aspect of your design. If this is on a Brown shirt I think a tan color would look nice in place of the black. Congrats on putting up your first design.


serloren - 7/28/2010 3:14:25 PM

I'm presuming you used a brown shirt to sort of signify dirt - bones being under, etc. But it's awfully hard to see, maybe either go with a somewhat lighter shirt color, or brighten and/or emphasize the text a little more? Keep at it! :-)


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