Love the idea of it, not sure why its on it twice, maybe sub in a reference,
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The texture work is very good, but the font is off. It looks too scrunched-up. From past experience, I know how hard it can be to fit a font into a specific path, early on. Sometimes a little extra work the hard way, can go the distance. In other words, spend a little more time on the Type (font) and this shirt will be stellar. Hope that helps!